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Edit, Grammar, Cohesiveness

I had to do an interview for a class. Can someone review this for grammar, sentence structure, cohesiveness, spelling and punctuation. (Please edit). Can you tell me where I might need improvement when writing investigatory reports. Does this report make sense.
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I have attached two files - Maria Vaugn InterviewA.doc and Maria Vaugn InterviewB.doc. The first shows all the corrections and suggestions which I think ...