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Technical and grammatical setence corrections

These setences are from a formal business writing class and evidentally have problems. If the setences themselves can be proofread and corrected individually it would help soooo much. Thanks!

They are the face of the company - although not all public relations managers work in the public eye.

In this rigorous profession, you are expected to put the company's best foot forward.

As you can see, the public relations field is relatively untouched, althought the numbers are currently low, keen competition is in the near future.

Ultimately, when preparing for a career in the public relations sector, experience and good communication skills are key.

Getting your foot in the door is the first step to success in any profession.

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1) They are the face of the company - although not all public relations managers work in the public eye.

The public relations manager is the visible face of the company - although not all of them work under the public gaze.

2) In this rigorous profession, you are expected to put ...

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Corrects errors in sentences.

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