I need doctoral feedback on the following problem statements that are attached.
The first paragraph, which is the vision paragraph, is not focused on the vision. The vision is that we want the organizations to be diverse so that they perform better. This is the first part of the problem statement.
The second part is: Today we have approaches to promoting diversity that fail. If we use an inappropriate method for promoting diversity, then our organization can fail leading to quality ...
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