I'm writing a research statement on "State Testing and Impact on Children ". I'm stuck on the Hypothesis: here is what I have so far:
There are better methods of teaching and learning than constant testing processes such as those used in most education systems today
Can anyone help me here?© BrainMass Inc. brainmass.com December 15, 2020, 10:27 pm ad1c9bdddf
I will try to help you. Your thesis statement is too general. You need to focus your hypothesis. Every thesis statement should be able to answer the "So What?" question.
What this means is that a thesis statement needs to show specifically what you intend to accomplish in your research essay. This also helps YOU write the paper because it gives you direction and acts as a kind of ...
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