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In order to help with writing short criticisms to these email messages, please allow these ideas to guide you:

#1: This email offers an opening inquiry about a convenience store advertised for sale. It is formal in its opening salutation. It also includes specific dates regarding when the
bulletin appeared. It also reinforces in the body a request for preliminary information. It also identifies a specific "$50,000 of the total" fianancing amount. Its specificity adds to the body's effectiveness. However, it does contain some run-ons ...

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