This posting focuses on short criticism to email messages.
In order to help with writing short criticisms to these email messages, please allow these ideas to guide you:
#1: This email offers an opening inquiry about a convenience store advertised for sale. It is formal in its opening salutation. It also includes specific dates regarding when the
bulletin appeared. It also reinforces in the body a request for preliminary information. It also identifies a specific "$50,000 of the total" fianancing amount. Its specificity adds to the body's effectiveness. However, it does contain some run-ons ...
This posting provides feedback about email messages.