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Please proofread and edit. Specifically, subject verb agreement, spelling punctuation, sentence structure and cohesiveness. I am horrible at writing and any help you can provide would be useful. Also, I am concerned about transitioning into new paragraphs. How can I make sentences read more fluently. Your critique is helpful. Is this coherent? Do I need more information?

Please include whether you disagree or agree with the discussion conclusion and why. Please be specific as to why. Is the conclusion credit or is there not enough proof to determine that a violation has been committed. Your suggestions are appreciated.

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