I am writing a persuasive speech to persuade my audience to graduate from college. I am having a little trouble with the outline.
Topic : To persuade my audience to graduate from school.
Thesis: Having a college education will give enable the student to give back to the community, have a better quality of lfe, and participate in the community.
Common Ground: Everyone wants to get a job to provide opportuniies to advasnce in a career.
Credibility: I am determined to finish my education to be able to make a living and take care of myself.
NEED: This is the section where you will present your solution with appropriate evidence and documentation. ***THIS PART IS WHERE I AM HAVING A PROBLEM****
SATIFICATION (solution) This is where you present your solution. Be sure to demonstrate that your plan is practical. *****THIS IS WHERE I AM HAVING A PROBLEM******
VISUALIZATION:This section is where what will happen with follow though. Include facts that prove your point. *******THIS PART ALSO IS WHERE I ANM HAVING A PROBLEM.
I HAVE DONE THE OTHER PARTS ie; Conclusion and Zinger. I PUT SOME OF MY ANSWERS SO YOU CAN SEE I HAVE BEEN ATTEMPTING TO WORK ON IT.
I AM ALSO SUPPOSE TO DO A WORK CITED PAGE IN MLA FORMAT FROM AN ARTICLE PERTAINING TO THE TOPIC: NEW YOKR TIMES OR ANY JOURNAL.
THIS IS MY FIRST TME DOING A PERSUASIVE PAPER OUTLINE.
Okay- let's take a look at what we have here. You have an excellent start- great effort so far! Public Speaking is my favorite class to teach- you are so fortunate to be taking it.
I need you to think about a couple of things first (just suggestions!):
A. Who is your audience? Are you giving this speech to a bunch of students who are already enrolled in college? Are they freshman in high school? Or are they seniors who have already made their decision? How is this speech going to impact them (if at all)- haven't they already made the choice to go to college for the reasons you have outlined? Or is the purpose of the speech to reinforce that decision- if that is so than I would verbally note that in your intro.
B. Give back and participate in your community- you may want to make a clear difference between the two as you have them as two separate main points.
C. Common ground- hold on are you sure everyone in your audience wants a career with advancement? Maybe the common ground is that you're all coming to a point in your life ...