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A. Attention Getter/Hook: Please add an interesting opener to lure readers
B. Thesis Sample: Shelley's "Ozymandias" is a classic because it articulates a deeply philosophical theme about art's immortality, the morality of politicians, and man's mortality using unique style and form.
Paragraph 2: Shelley's Ozymandias" is a classic because it articulates a deeply philosophical theme about art's ability to outlast time.
A. The poem also offers a theme about Man Versus Nature, and it depicts art's' ultimate victory.
B. This poem reiterates that Ozymandias' accomplishments are not ...
Ideas are generated about Shelley's "Ozymandias."